I have a story to tell you guys. i hope you enjoy it. :)

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There was a man. He was a timid, but nice man that did not come without his confusion of the world. He lived life like any other normal man but there was one thing he could never understand. The man traveled and seen many things in his life and lived to be friends with everyone who welcomed him into their lives. However, he felt very out of place but remained hopeful. So, doing what he usually does, the man took a journey his legs could not take him: his subconscious. There, he discovered what he needed all along: reassurance. Reassurance for what, you may ask? The man was assured that he would be never alone even though he stood by himself and as long as his spirit had the will, he would always be able to travel and experience many more great things as well as making many new friends. For the man knew that death was never an end, but a new beginning.

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  • Darkoil
    8 years ago

    Go back to school and learn to write correctly.

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  • Holzman_67
    8 years ago

    "...There, he discovered what he needed all along: reassurance. Reassurance for what, you may ask?.."

    I hate it when people write like that, it's contrived to me and a little pretentious.

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    • Holzman_67
      8 years ago

      I don't want to discourage you though, keep writing :)

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  • seekelp
    8 years ago

    Fuckin M. Night Shamalan'd me at the end there.

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  • Shrunk
    8 years ago

    Interesting concept I guess, but difficult to read, I'm guessing English isn't your first language or else you're still in high school or something

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  • VinnyB
    8 years ago

    He sounds like he may be suffering from delusions and he might want to consult a physician.

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  • [Old Memory]
    8 years ago

    I really liked it because I could relate to it a lot.
    Some may think I have lost my mind, but I really to feel I have lived this same life many times and each time my life is slightly different, but I choose to keep reliving just to possibly reexperience what good memories I have.
    Its not often I relate so much to something. I really liked this.

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  • peterr2
    8 years ago

    I never read a story without blowjobs.

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    • eastbeast
      8 years ago

      I agree, where was the cumshot?

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  • [Old Memory]
    8 years ago

    maybe he wants to hold the skater's hand , who doesnt? its fast on that ice :D

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    • Redcoats
      8 years ago

      I just re-read the story looking for an ice skater lol :P

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  • thegypsysailor
    8 years ago

    Way too close to religion for me.
    All things come to an end; it is the proper order of things. We die and that is fine. Why are so many afraid of that end? If one has taken full advantage of THIS life, then why would one need another?

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  • Freedom_
    8 years ago

    Where did his his subconscious take him? How does he know it's real? Did he give up on physical life in lieu of spiritual travel? Does he have an astral life and little 'ol metaphysical babehs?

    Other than all the unanswered questions, I like it.

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  • Ace9
    8 years ago

    Wow, I could never see that coming...

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