Will you follow me to the new world? My Children

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  • Also there's an unnecessary comma in the first sentence which should simply be a period, dividing the sentence into two.
    There's also an exclamation mark in sentence two which should not be there.

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    • There's more. "It's creator" should be "its creator".
      Actually, the whole piece is shit, probably written by an illiterate second grader.

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      • Actually that part is correct. The apostrophe doesn't make it "It is" the apostrophe is there because the creator belongs to Poland.

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        • When the term it is should be used it should be contracted to 'it's' but when there's a possessive for an object its is used.
          Basically its is used similar to his and hers.

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        • That's wrong. It usually works like that, for example, Sally's book, but this is an exception. The possessive is "its".

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