The poo from hell

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  • Enizzle
    8 years ago | pl

    You forgot the word "of" after signs and sincere.

    Hence, your literary critique is invalid.

    Excellent attempt though.

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    • VirgilManly
      8 years ago | pl

      Your critique of my critique is invalid as a comma could have been used. Bad punctuation doesn't invalidate the same as say an endlessly drawn out plot line that peaks too soon and just drones on.

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      • Enizzle
        8 years ago | pl

        Endlessly drawn out?

        It takes 5 minutes to read this. Are you perhaps suffering from ADD? If so, I'd suggest you stop reading longer stories and stick to picture books, my son.

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        • VirgilManly
          8 years ago | pl

          Rarely does anyone on this site want to spend that much time reading a post. That's why posts are usually the length of your first paragraph.
          Simmer down now and don't upset yourself.

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