Your critique of my critique is invalid as a comma could have been used. Bad punctuation doesn't invalidate the same as say an endlessly drawn out plot line that peaks too soon and just drones on.
It takes 5 minutes to read this. Are you perhaps suffering from ADD? If so, I'd suggest you stop reading longer stories and stick to picture books, my son.
Rarely does anyone on this site want to spend that much time reading a post. That's why posts are usually the length of your first paragraph.
Simmer down now and don't upset yourself.
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I have to agree...although it did have potential and showed signs sincere effort.
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You forgot the word "of" after signs and sincere.
Hence, your literary critique is invalid.
Excellent attempt though.
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Your critique of my critique is invalid as a comma could have been used. Bad punctuation doesn't invalidate the same as say an endlessly drawn out plot line that peaks too soon and just drones on.
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Endlessly drawn out?
It takes 5 minutes to read this. Are you perhaps suffering from ADD? If so, I'd suggest you stop reading longer stories and stick to picture books, my son.
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Rarely does anyone on this site want to spend that much time reading a post. That's why posts are usually the length of your first paragraph.
Simmer down now and don't upset yourself.