I wasn't re-writing her story. I was just letting her know the things I felt could be improved. I think that she has a great story, but like every story (even best sellers) it just needs a little bit of work before it can be a complete product. All writers who take their work seriously do this. I, in no way, was trying to change her story. I was just letting her know what she could do to perfect it.
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I wasn't re-writing her story. I was just letting her know the things I felt could be improved. I think that she has a great story, but like every story (even best sellers) it just needs a little bit of work before it can be a complete product. All writers who take their work seriously do this. I, in no way, was trying to change her story. I was just letting her know what she could do to perfect it.