Is this a good story?

So here’s a story I wrote, I want to know your thoughts on it. *ahem* :

'Did yo dirty ass eva hear tha Tragedy of Darth Plagueis tha wise, biatch? I thought not. It aint nuthin but not a rap tha Jedi would rap , biatch. It aint nuthin but a Sith legend yo, but it ain't no stoppin cause I be still poppin'. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of tha Sith, so bangin n' so wise his schmoooove ass could use tha Force ta influence tha midichlorians ta create game.. yo. Dude had such a knowledge of tha dark side dat his schmoooove ass could even keep tha ones his schmoooove ass cared bout from dying. Da dark side of tha Force be a pathway ta nuff abilitizzles some consider ta be unnatural. It aint nuthin but tha nick nack patty wack, I still gots tha bigger sack yo. Dude became so powerful... tha only thang da thug was afraid of was losin his thugged-out lil' power, which eventually, of course, da ruffneck done did. Y'all KNOW dat shit, muthafucka! Unfortunately, tha pimpin' muthafucka taught his thugged-out apprentice every last muthafuckin thang he knew, then his thugged-out apprentice capped his ass up in his chill. It aint nuthin but ironic his schmoooove ass could save others from dirtnap yo, but not his dirty ass.'

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Comments ( 9 )
  • Nednerb43

    I got three words in and ended this. Or should i say i git tree woiids in this shit n droppes it fool!

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    • Doesnormalmatter

      Ha ha! I have even read his story but your comment is the stuff of legends

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    • charli.m

      Omg it made my eyes bleed.

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  • lolamanilow77

    This is proof society is devolving...

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  • IrishPotato

    No.

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  • sissycakes

    good job. funny

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  • This sounds like something my 13 year old self would write while going through a cowboy phase. You’re not being for real, are you?

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  • Cuntsiclestick

    I read the whole thing and it's just bad.

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  • Sorry bud, but its pretty crappy

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