is my story good art?

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  • finn
    7 years ago | pl

    I agree. It sucks. It seems like random thoughts all jammed together. A 2 year old could do better.

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    • Anonymous Post Author
      7 years ago | pl

      it is a mensaphorical story, there is no need to be well written

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      • LittleGirlRapedAndSodomised#Q1
        7 years ago | pl

        Everything is always better when it is well written even if it's intentional. Your shit looks like a bunch of unintentional written slop and like he said a 2 year old, infact it reminds me of a 2 year old scribbling tripe with chalk on a sidewalk.

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