is my story good art?

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  • LittleGirlRapedAndSodomised#Q1
    7 years ago | pl

    after reading...

    "''did you see lately, the jesus fucks all the boys in my livingroom''

    ...I lost interest and it became nauseating but read the whole thing and it SUCKS...

    It sucks big dick in my opinion...

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    • finn
      7 years ago | pl

      I agree. It sucks. It seems like random thoughts all jammed together. A 2 year old could do better.

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      • Anonymous Post Author
        7 years ago | pl

        it is a mensaphorical story, there is no need to be well written

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        • LittleGirlRapedAndSodomised#Q1
          7 years ago | pl

          Everything is always better when it is well written even if it's intentional. Your shit looks like a bunch of unintentional written slop and like he said a 2 year old, infact it reminds me of a 2 year old scribbling tripe with chalk on a sidewalk.

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