Is it normal to write breakup poetry?

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  • Oreobeast
    11 years ago | pl

    I wrote 2, they are so chessy I would be embarrassed

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    • [Old Memory]
      11 years ago | pl

      dont be embarressed it doesnt matter if theyre cheezy

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      • Oreobeast
        11 years ago | pl

        Why does my heart long?
        For the one who is all but gone?
        Why did she have to leave?
        And break my heart so that i greave?

        Its been 9 months since that day,
        When my true love went away
        I do not know why i love her still, 
        Because She was the one who was real

        My friends say get over it its done,
        But they have not yet loved someone
        Oh i would give anything to
        Hear her say i love you

        But ill never hear the words i want
        Because she has moved on
        And Casey if i ever hear your voice
        Ill hold your love once more without a choice

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        • [Old Memory]
          11 years ago | pl

          heartfelt words , lovely :)

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          • Oreobeast
            11 years ago | pl

            Thats what i get for loving you
            Said you'd always bee true
            Thats what i get for trusting you
            It should have been youu

            I dont know, what happened then
            I just know, i woulda stayed till the end
            I shoulda never had faith, that we would last
            But you broke my heart, like shattered glass

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