Is it normal to write breakup poetry?

You are viewing a single comment's thread.

← View full post
Comments ( 8 ) Sort: best | oldest
  • [Old Memory]
    11 years ago | pl

    any samples?

    Comment Hidden ( show )
    Report
    0
    0
      -
    • Oreobeast
      11 years ago | pl

      I wrote 2, they are so chessy I would be embarrassed

      Comment Hidden ( show )
      Report
      0
      0
        -
      • [Old Memory]
        11 years ago | pl

        dont be embarressed it doesnt matter if theyre cheezy

        Comment Hidden ( show )
        Report
        0
        0
          -
        • Oreobeast
          11 years ago | pl

          Why does my heart long?
          For the one who is all but gone?
          Why did she have to leave?
          And break my heart so that i greave?

          Its been 9 months since that day,
          When my true love went away
          I do not know why i love her still, 
          Because She was the one who was real

          My friends say get over it its done,
          But they have not yet loved someone
          Oh i would give anything to
          Hear her say i love you

          But ill never hear the words i want
          Because she has moved on
          And Casey if i ever hear your voice
          Ill hold your love once more without a choice

          Comment Hidden ( show )
          Report
          0
          0
            -
          • [Old Memory]
            11 years ago | pl

            heartfelt words , lovely :)

            Comment Hidden ( show )
            Report
            0
            0
              -
            • Oreobeast
              11 years ago | pl

              Thats what i get for loving you
              Said you'd always bee true
              Thats what i get for trusting you
              It should have been youu

              I dont know, what happened then
              I just know, i woulda stayed till the end
              I shoulda never had faith, that we would last
              But you broke my heart, like shattered glass

              Comment Hidden ( show )
              Report
              0
              0