I am so sad man you know.
I am really sad if i am smoking a cigarette
I feel the pain
i make the deal
with the devils tool
the mighty richman fall
but cant ignore the cause
when i looked back i was all
sandpaper in the wind with
bills of steel
feeling the chills in my heavenly
house i feel everything
is back to me
I will stop smoking
when i am Happy
its really hard man
i feel i am old
i want to quit but its
so hard i dont wanna
live this way.
These were the feelings i wrote
I must do something please pray that i get a love
a gf or something so i can quit .
Dude you are talented! I thought that was a song. Don't worry , but getting a gf won' t solve your sadness, isolation, addiction, et. Its only something temporary because i used to think that to.
Im not telling you its gonna be easy, im telling you its gonna be worth it! Set youself free from the birdcage your in,only you are able to seek the light that lies deep within your heart.
Never Give UP! Stop complaning about fate and how it can't be changed!
Sir, thanks for saying that i quit smoking 5 days ago because of i getting really sick and irritating my sinus very much hope so i will never touch it again and i think the song i wrote is nothing man i just sticked up random words 2gether ive got better things i wrote which makes kinda good meanings.
I was walking down the hill
Raining so cold
felt my skin chill
There is a road covered in grass
I waited for a bus So hasty
With only a driver on the seat
I didn't know if it was the cold or that the bus was ghostly
Then I asked the bus driver I am going to the church
He looked at me with his clear eyes
They seemed they could look in someone's past
I carried on and took a seat
While i was thinking about the grave i visit
Where I bury my love
With eyes so dry
that the rain cried
I forget to say her goodbye
I came to the church's gate
And I asked the bus driver how much
He said 7 dollars for 2
But I was the only one on the bus i believed
He said did u really loved her or hated her
I got astonished for what he asked
For a moment I saw him and said, you are drunk
and he left
I got to the church
And it was still raining and i was still dreaming about her
I got to the church I felt so heavy in my heart
Thank you god that i didn't know
And thank you god that I just don't care anymore
And thank you god u gave me this life
And thank you god u took her away
And thank u god i gave her to you
He takes a gun and aims for his throat and says
Is it normal that i need music 24/7 ?
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Yea thats a good way to take out your urges to smoke. Try learning guitar or uke so you get consumed and ignore your smoking habit
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I am so sad man you know.
I am really sad if i am smoking a cigarette
I feel the pain
i make the deal
with the devils tool
the mighty richman fall
but cant ignore the cause
when i looked back i was all
sandpaper in the wind with
bills of steel
feeling the chills in my heavenly
house i feel everything
is back to me
I will stop smoking
when i am Happy
its really hard man
i feel i am old
i want to quit but its
so hard i dont wanna
live this way.
These were the feelings i wrote
I must do something please pray that i get a love
a gf or something so i can quit .
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Dude you are talented! I thought that was a song. Don't worry , but getting a gf won' t solve your sadness, isolation, addiction, et. Its only something temporary because i used to think that to.
Im not telling you its gonna be easy, im telling you its gonna be worth it! Set youself free from the birdcage your in,only you are able to seek the light that lies deep within your heart.
Never Give UP! Stop complaning about fate and how it can't be changed!
Face the man in the mirror and learn to love him.
Don't give up and prove them wrong!
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Sir, thanks for saying that i quit smoking 5 days ago because of i getting really sick and irritating my sinus very much hope so i will never touch it again and i think the song i wrote is nothing man i just sticked up random words 2gether ive got better things i wrote which makes kinda good meanings.
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Haha np oi im actually a miss ;). You can do it , i know you can don't give up. I beleive in you, you just have to beleive in yourself to.
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Still no cigs and i am better now just feel breathless right now but i am lifting weights to feel better :)
I smoked half a cig today but i am sure i will not do that again cuz i believe now <3
Poetry? cool :)
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:) ive got more if u wanna read it
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yes I do want to read it!
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// The Man on the hill //
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I was walking down the hill
Raining so cold
felt my skin chill
There is a road covered in grass
I waited for a bus So hasty
With only a driver on the seat
I didn't know if it was the cold or that the bus was ghostly
Then I asked the bus driver I am going to the church
He looked at me with his clear eyes
They seemed they could look in someone's past
I carried on and took a seat
While i was thinking about the grave i visit
Where I bury my love
With eyes so dry
that the rain cried
I forget to say her goodbye
I came to the church's gate
And I asked the bus driver how much
He said 7 dollars for 2
But I was the only one on the bus i believed
He said did u really loved her or hated her
I got astonished for what he asked
For a moment I saw him and said, you are drunk
and he left
I got to the church
And it was still raining and i was still dreaming about her
I got to the church I felt so heavy in my heart
Thank you god that i didn't know
And thank you god that I just don't care anymore
And thank you god u gave me this life
And thank you god u took her away
And thank u god i gave her to you
He takes a gun and aims for his throat and says
and Thank u god to take me with her.