After the period separating the first and second sentence, you need a space. "Disibilitie" is spelled disability, and the "we"s and that sentence should be "we're". In your third sentence, after "FYI", "The" shouldn't be capitalized, neither should "Ain't", but congratulations on putting an apostrophe in the right place. Parenthesis aren't quotation marks, honey. In your last sentence, "need's" should be "needs". You're wencome :)"
Is it normal that I HATE mentally retarded people?
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After the period separating the first and second sentence, you need a space. "Disibilitie" is spelled disability, and the "we"s and that sentence should be "we're". In your third sentence, after "FYI", "The" shouldn't be capitalized, neither should "Ain't", but congratulations on putting an apostrophe in the right place. Parenthesis aren't quotation marks, honey. In your last sentence, "need's" should be "needs". You're wencome :)"