The whole "loss of control" and rapey bits are such a common fantasy (sorry feminists) that it makes this particular example a cliche ridden lot of tripe. The only factor that could influence my review would be to know what the prompt in question was... perhaps it was to write a cliche ridden lot of tripe, in which case, this is a superior example.
Is it normal that I forgave him?
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I hope so...
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The whole "loss of control" and rapey bits are such a common fantasy (sorry feminists) that it makes this particular example a cliche ridden lot of tripe. The only factor that could influence my review would be to know what the prompt in question was... perhaps it was to write a cliche ridden lot of tripe, in which case, this is a superior example.