It's obvious that English is not your first language, but if you want your English-speaking readers to understand anything of what you are writing, then you have to put a little more effort into writing out your questions.
It's not just that your English grammar is poor, it's that your whole sentence structure is completely jumbled up and you use some words that make absolutely no sense compared to the words around them or even in your paragraph.
I don't think you understand just how bad your English really is and rereading your story doesn't help to grasp your point. You obviously have not mastered complex English sentence structure yet, so maybe you should stick to what you do know and make simpler sentences.
I probably shouldn't be wasting my time explaining this to you, but I'm feeling generous.
Fine, let's start with your title then:
"INN to be more cruel when alone than socialize with people?"
What do you mean by "more cruel when alone"?
The definition of cruel is: willfully or knowingly causing pain or distress to others.
So WHO are you being cruel to?
The next thing that doesn't make sense is:
"I build my own sense of identity and protect it so I can see who's the weakest link..."
How does protecting your identity help you see who's the weakest link?
And what about the rest of your sentence:
"...usually any kind of invalidator..."
Normally, invalidator isn't a word typically used in the English language and if it is, it is used to refer to an official (like someone in an government job) who can invalidate or nullify things. So, using this word in your sentence makes no sense at all.
I am also confused by some conflicting ideas in the next part of your sentence with the sentence following it:
"...my wall still do tend to melt almost completely when anyone is around me. What they don't know is how different I am when I'm by myself..."
If your wall melts around people, then wouldn't it be safe to assume that they do know the real you? Your sentences contradict one another.
Next up:
"...without let them know after I've seem enough about who they really are."
INN to be more cruel when alone then socialize with people?
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It's obvious that English is not your first language, but if you want your English-speaking readers to understand anything of what you are writing, then you have to put a little more effort into writing out your questions.
It's not just that your English grammar is poor, it's that your whole sentence structure is completely jumbled up and you use some words that make absolutely no sense compared to the words around them or even in your paragraph.
I don't think you understand just how bad your English really is and rereading your story doesn't help to grasp your point. You obviously have not mastered complex English sentence structure yet, so maybe you should stick to what you do know and make simpler sentences.
I probably shouldn't be wasting my time explaining this to you, but I'm feeling generous.
Fine, let's start with your title then:
"INN to be more cruel when alone than socialize with people?"
What do you mean by "more cruel when alone"?
The definition of cruel is: willfully or knowingly causing pain or distress to others.
So WHO are you being cruel to?
The next thing that doesn't make sense is:
"I build my own sense of identity and protect it so I can see who's the weakest link..."
How does protecting your identity help you see who's the weakest link?
And what about the rest of your sentence:
"...usually any kind of invalidator..."
Normally, invalidator isn't a word typically used in the English language and if it is, it is used to refer to an official (like someone in an government job) who can invalidate or nullify things. So, using this word in your sentence makes no sense at all.
I am also confused by some conflicting ideas in the next part of your sentence with the sentence following it:
"...my wall still do tend to melt almost completely when anyone is around me. What they don't know is how different I am when I'm by myself..."
If your wall melts around people, then wouldn't it be safe to assume that they do know the real you? Your sentences contradict one another.
Next up:
"...without let them know after I've seem enough about who they really are."
What????