I narrate my daily activities

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  • You could make it more interesting by using more adjectives and adverbs.

    I stared, wistfully, into the open drum of the hot tumble dryer. Take those warm, dry clothes out I told myself. Carefully reaching inside, I could feel the heat on my skin...

    Works for me.

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