I lick her smelly feet.

Not too bad but you began to ramble a bit. The problem is your use of run on sentences. A semi colon (;) will provide both a break in the action and a sort of change of direction when used properly. A colon (:) can be used as a signal that an illustration of the point you are trying to get across follows, or a more specific meaning of your point now follows. This will eliminate the overuse of conjunctions such as: and, but, etc. The result will shorten your post thus making it less tedious for a person to read it. But I see some effort at trying to get better. Keep at it, Bro.