Persons are real, 'angels' are not (unless you would like to revert this word back to it's original meaning, that being, literally a 'messenger' [who is a real person]). If you would like to dispute this, then please describe the Physical properties of this so-called spirit.
In this instance, however, since you had made an allusion (indirect reference) to what the man had said, it is acceptable usage.
Now you will know how to challenge the man, instead of being freaked out.
[Okay, so] is superfluous. You should have begun your story with; "I went on a camping trip..."
Finally, we arrived there and unpacked. Use arrive instead of got. Properly, it should be, 'had arrived', but in this instance, 'had' is understood and is acceptable.
We were very hungry... Use very (or one of the many synonyms) instead of 'pretty'. Remember, 'pretty' means beautiful. What you said, is that you were beautiful hungry. It does not make sense.
About, please do not use textese.
Much better.
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Persons are real, 'angels' are not (unless you would like to revert this word back to it's original meaning, that being, literally a 'messenger' [who is a real person]). If you would like to dispute this, then please describe the Physical properties of this so-called spirit.
In this instance, however, since you had made an allusion (indirect reference) to what the man had said, it is acceptable usage.
Now you will know how to challenge the man, instead of being freaked out.
[Okay, so] is superfluous. You should have begun your story with; "I went on a camping trip..."
Finally, we arrived there and unpacked. Use arrive instead of got. Properly, it should be, 'had arrived', but in this instance, 'had' is understood and is acceptable.
We were very hungry... Use very (or one of the many synonyms) instead of 'pretty'. Remember, 'pretty' means beautiful. What you said, is that you were beautiful hungry. It does not make sense.
About, please do not use textese.
Much better.
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I command you stop talking empty nonsense everywhere, you mentally challenged pseudo-intellectual.
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I agree with this! YES!