I liked it. But if it were a poem it would need a more complex and more consistent rhyme scheme. I do think it would be better as a song, but I also think that some revising would make it a bit better. But over all it wasn't the worst thing that I have ever read.
Advice on a poem/song?
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I liked it. But if it were a poem it would need a more complex and more consistent rhyme scheme. I do think it would be better as a song, but I also think that some revising would make it a bit better. But over all it wasn't the worst thing that I have ever read.