Advice on a poem/song?

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  • [Old Memory]
    12 years ago | pl

    i lke the last line , it dies tonight,dies tonight, and when i first read it i also thought of it as a song

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    • [Old Memory]
      12 years ago | pl

      i re read your poem and i like it

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